Sample, Option 2 Fiction Chapter
Note: This chapter is written for the book True Believer where the whole book was written like one long poem. The chapter below was just mirroring the format. If you choose to write an additional chapter for one of our books you'll want to mirror the format of the book you chose.
Forest…
ENG 271
Final Project
LaVaughn’s Later Days
I let out an involuntary yawn, long, drawn out, honest
the kind of yawn that says you don't even remember what sleep is.
It’s the beginning of Monday and I’ve been up since the end of Saturday.
When I was a little girl, I spent my time
complaining about not having money to spend
Now, I’m a trauma surgeon and
I have the audacity
to complain about not having the time to spend my money.
My son didn’t take out the trash before school and
my daughter left her cereal bowl in the sink full
of milk.
My feet hurt and my patience is surely close
to running out.
This is the third overnight this week.
Time stands still when a beating heart
on the operating room table is depending on you
to make sure it keeps on beating
but the hours still pass and
your feet know exactly how many minutes
its been since you last sat down
I kick my shoes to the side of my bed
and draw my curtains, muting the light
of Monday morning.
I collapse on my bed and
don’t even bother changing clothes.
Sleep is my only thought.
My tired mind, body
and soul puts up no fight.
I drift, too tired to even dream.
The rattle of my pager vibrating on the night stand.
puts an abrupt end to the dreams I was too tired to even have in the first place.
This isn’t abnormal, but I’m still reluctant.
It’s still Monday.
My day off.
I fell into my slumber at breakfast
and now I was being thrown out of it just after what the rest of awakened world
would be calling lunch.
I reach for my phone and dial the hospital’s trauma center back and before I can even utter
“this better be good,” to Loretta the senior nurse she says in few words
everything that she could have said
and nothing that I wanted to ever hear.
“High school shooting. Mass casualties expected,
the ambulances can’t get ‘em here fast enough, Loretta says.”
I’m groggy and only one of my eyes has decided to open.
“How many? What else do we know?, I’m not on-call today,” I mumble.
“LaVaugn, it’s your—,“ Loretta hesitated.
Loretta was a seasoned nurse and didn’t know what hesitation was.
Something wasn’t right.
“Loretta, you’ve never minced words, now isn’t the time to start,” she has my attention.
“… the gunman opened fire at the basketball game your son was at. The away game at the school downtown,” Loretta spat the words at me fast. “He’s alive, LaVaughn. But they already got him in surgery, they couldn’t wait.”
I have never been so awake in my life.
I send my children to the what they call “the good school” uptown
to avoid all of what I had to endure my whole time in high school.
The metal detectors. The bi-weekly bomb threats and all to frequent shootings.
Now this.
I can’t feel my legs, but somehow they’re moving me out the door.
I burst into the doors of the hospital and move down the same hallway
I stroll down every morning.
Not today. Today, I’m running.
Running into a battle field.
No matter how many years you work the trauma floor,
there are some sights and sounds you will never be prepared for.
Loretta has been a nurse for thirty one years and she still says
she ain’t seen it all.
I tap my toes and bite my lip in the elevator.
This elevator is always slow, but today
today it was glacial. The slowest it has ever moved.
The silence on the elevator is deafening like
the way it gets real quiet right before a thunderstorm hits.
Then the doors slide open and the thunder
hits me.
“I have a male, late teens, critical condition, aggressive abdominal hemorrhage”
“Female, mid thirties, bed number 42, pregnant, fading fast, book me an OR!”
“Two DOA, beds 28 and 19”
“I need a crash cart!”
If I could paint a picture of what I thought war looked like,
this hospital floor would have been worse.
My son is on this floor, clinging on to his life
and I’m expected to throw myself into and play god
for everyone else except him.
I don’t know if it was adrenaline or just instinct,
but I grabbed the first chart off of the first bed I saw.
This is it LaVaughn. This is why you became a Doctor.
I flash back to my high school
a long long time ago.
I hear the shells hit the floor of the linoleum hallway of my high school.
The distant screams and sounds of slamming doors
the echo of lost hope reverberating.
Even if your grades made the cut,
you were lucky if you lived to see your diploma.
We we’re the lucky ones, we weren’t in the hallway when
the gunman decided the lives in the hallway weren’t worth living.
Those bullets could have ended it all for me
like it did for the freshman girl who was in the wrong hallway
at the wrong time.
I come back to reality
and I have to catch my breath to catch up with the moment.
Everyone’s moving. I’m moving.
Nurses are running. Surgeons are pushing beds and yelling orders.
It’s all a hurried blur.
It’s a long line of victims,
all too young to be here.
Not that anyone will ever be old enough to deserve a mass shooting,
but the fact that these are kids with long lives ahead of them, with dreams.
It makes it harder.
Another surgeon moves with haste down the line of kids
Some conscious, some not.
Some with a parent or a friend by their side.
He’s looks at each patient for a split second and decides whether or not
they can be saved.
If he leaves a puts a red sticker on their bed, there’s hope. If he doesn’t
it’s already too late.
He has to move fast and in that second,
he decides who has a chance at life and
who doesn’t.
This is nothing new, this is how the trauma floor works,
but we rarely work in this quantity of patients and not usually all this young.
I’m looking at my neighbors kids.
I’m looking at my son’s ex-girlfriend.
I’m looking at the girl who my daughter shared a cubby with in kindergarten.
In the medical world, we try to keep
conflict of interest
to a minimum.
These kids are the kids who played on my street until
their mom’s called them home for dinner on school nights.
These kids are my kid’s friends.
One of these kids—is my kid.
I still don’t know if he’s alive or not and
I don’t even have time to speak up
because I’m too busy giving CPR and saving a young mom
and her unborn baby boy fight for their lives.
I sent my kids to the “good school”.
I made the right choice.
How could this happen. This can’t be happening.
After all I struggled through growing up and
going to the school with limited resources.
Working my way through medical school to
pave the way for a brighter future for my kids.
Dedicating my life to saving other lives.
This is how it ends?
The God that I have just started to really believe in has this
in his plan?
He gives me this gift. This inate skill to take a fragile, dwindling life and
nurture it back to health. But he let’s my son get shot.
He shields me from being shot in the halls of my high school, only to have my
son shot at his own basketball game?
I continue with compressions on the young pregnant girl but
I know she’s already gone.
“Time of death, 22:06,” I somberly relay to a nurse standing alongside me.
I’m sleep deprived.
I don’t know if my kids are alive.
I’m scared and I’m angry.
I have lives to save, but I can’t focus.
“LaVaughn!” the chief of surgery yells my name over the chaos of screams, telephones rings and frantic medical jargon filling the room. “I need you in this, are you in this? Where’s your head at, LaVaughn? I’ve got kids dying here! Delegate!”
I come to again. I realize where I’m at and what I need to do. I move in and
do what I do everyday. I save lives. Today though, I’m not the one saving lives.
My hands are moving, but I don’t know who is telling them what to do. I’m on autopilot.
Why would someone
do this to
my son?
My James.
My baby.
How could someone, especially so young, harbor so much
hate in their heart
that they would wake up and decide to open fire on
innocent kids?
I didn’t understand it when I was growing up
and there was nothing that was going
to make me understand now.
“Excuse me, M’aam?” a deep voice from behind me bellows.
I turn around and find two police officers.
“I’ve got a lot on my mind officers, you’ll need to make it quick,” I say to them.
“Ma’am are you, LaVaugn? Mother of James?”
The officers had my attention.
“Yes!, Yes, I am!,” I quickly diverted my attention from the patient’s medical chart I had been analyzing. “Is he okay! What do you know! Don’t just stand there, is he out of surgery?”
“Ma’am,” the officer hesitated. “Your son James is alive and well.”
I didn’t think my heart could flutter so high in my chest,
my baby
he would survive this.
“Ma’am,” the officer continued.
“Your son is the shooter.
he opened fire on a gym
full of people and,
we need you to come with us.”
Just as quickly as my heart rose,
it sunk.
It sunk,
and it shattered.
My baby had survived,
but I now wasn’t sure I would.
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